THIS WAS AWESOME! I loved everything about it. His personality came though so much, in the little jokes in between, and in the dark atmosphere of the whole thing. And then that last line. It was just amazing all through!
totally agree w/ lostmyfearoffalling, that was f*ing AMAZING! I'm really glad I was just randomly clicking on this, cause...wow...wish I was that good... xD
I thought this was a good free-form-stream-of-consciousness-thing.
(#) Jero 2009-07-24
this is insane! i absoluetly love it!
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