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The New Face of Harry
(#) juggler196 2009-05-15
It's a good start. You've explained/shown harry's thought process as to how and why he's going to change, so let's see it. I'd recomend that the next chapter or two have some good interesting scenes to help hook the less patient readers. Overall a good story and i'll certainly look forward to and read the next chapters.The New Face of Harry
(#) zicou 2009-05-16
looks great! i hope there will be Ron & hermione bashing!
Continuuuuuue!
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(#) Nautilus 2009-05-16
i hope you have this planned... the end of that chapter seemed a little rushed.The New Face of Harry
(#) Cateagle 2009-05-16
Hmm, a most interesting start to your story and I look forward to seeing wherre you take it. An AU with a point of departure that early leaves room for all sorts of fun. If he takes the route indicated, I rather suspect he's going to change his third year elective choices and that should bring some enlightening disputes with Ron; what having him actually working hard to his fullest capabilties does to his relationship with Hermione will also be quite instructive of her true character. Heh, an industious and rapidly-learning Harry could also lead to some revelations if Dumbles has any manipulations going on that require an un-inquiring underachieving Harry.The New Face of Harry
(#) Wolfric 2011-09-17
This seems like a sound beginning but I suspect it is all there will ever be as a couple of years have passed with no more added. W.The New Face of Harry
(#) hpfanscs 2014-08-29
Pleasant one-shot. Could be a good start of a longer story, but it stands alone well.
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