- It was an interesting read. I think you masterfully avoided giving Harry way too much of the credit by creating a world where Hermione and Luna can overshadow him. I am certain he must have had enjoyed in this universe being less of a famous person than his wives.
I did think you were a little too harsh on Dumbles in the end. However, Rita was rather brilliant. I've often wondered how she was not already killed by something similar.
Write about Harry Potter in a epic nomadic battle for survival after an apocalyptic battle next .... :P ...... just an idea, but write something / anything. You're an awesome writer to follow.
- In reading this last chapter I saw a few hints of a slight connection to a trek-like future given the mentions of Xeno-Zoology and the mixing of magical and muggle worlds. Seems we both have been influenced by a certain crossover here at ficwad!
Love this Trio!
- Good wrapup to a very entertaining tale. Did Sirius really master a second canine form?
I'm surprised not to see a few Bruces and Sheilas in those author-lists. That's okay; the comm-crystal in chapter 2 didn't open with "HOW ARE YOU GENTLEMEN", either.
I don't think AD's treatment was too harsh at all. His original (canon) master-plan for Harry was evil; even after Harry was Horcrux-free, AD kept scrabbling, however covertly, for some means of forcing Harry to heel. I think what broke AD in the end was being unable to reclaim Harry as a tool to advance his own agenda and reputation. AD was no longer needed, hadn't been for quite some time, and no longer could compel others to pretend to him that he was.
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