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• You Get Under My Damn Skin.

  (#) Moonshyne 2009-05-21

  Hi there,
  
  I love this already. You had me at the whole serial killer thing, but when I saw that Bob was the main character I loved it even more.
  
  Looking forward to reading more when you get a chance.

  Author's response

  Hi (:
  
  I really had second thoughts about this one, but seeing your review, definitely makes me happy I posted.
  
  Thank you SO much for all of your reviews. (: It means alot.

• You Get Under My Damn Skin.

  (#) Zynneh 2009-05-31

  S'gud stuff :) But 'cos I'm an absolute bastard I had to point some stuff out 'cos I'm just picky about grammar and the like.
  
  The sun had shined extremely bright
  
  'shined' should be shone.
  
  Ashley Banez observed the cold body that layed silently
  
  'layed' should be lay. Also, if it's a dead body it ain't gonna be making much noise...
  
  she justed wished he was alive to see her living it.
  
  'justed' should be just
  
  She walked full circle around Lisa
  
  Could do with an 'a' or 'in a' after walked
  
  She sat down and breathed deep.
  
  'deep' should probably be deeply.

  Author's response

  no it's okay lol. I'm the same way.
  But I don't have Micorsoft so I can't tell the difference on Notepad :/ But thank I appreciate it :P

• You Get Under My Damn Skin.

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-06-13

  If you copy and paste your work when you're like, updating a story, you can click the spell check button. I dunno if it actually does that for every single person, but that's how it is on mine. Although...my mom did something to my computer, so no matter what I'm doing(except in word pad) there's a spell check. L O L
  
  But anyway, I'm pretty curious to see how this turns out XD
  
  REVENGE

  Author's response

  oh thanks for the tip, it won't always work for me but I'll try it anyways...(:
  
  Thank you!!

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