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• You Get Under My Damn Skin.

  (#) Moonshyne 2009-05-31

  Hey there,
  
  I loved this!! I wonder what Mr. Bryar wants with her? LOL!!
  
  I loved the bit with Frankie and attempting to use the taser. Too funny.
  
  I feel bad for Gee having something going down so badly. It must have been heartbreaking to tell the parents as well as the bad guy getting away.
  
  I can't wait to read more.

  Author's response

  Moonshyne? Can I just say that you never cease to make me smile? (:
  and I thought this was just a filler.
  hehe...yes what does Robert Bryar want with Ashley? xD
  
  I'm glad you found the part about Frank and the taser funny..I just couldn't help but wonder if that would really happen lol.
  
  Poor Gerard. Even I was alittle sad when writing that...we shall see next chapter about Bob's plan (:
  
  Thank you so much!
  
  -Lynai.

• You Get Under My Damn Skin.

  (#) Zynneh 2009-05-31

  Weee I'm back again xP
  
  she would waiting...............
  
  Instead of a zillion dots, the 'official' ellipsis is just three dots '...' and having more than that gets kinda annoying.
  
  I promised her as soon as the test came backand I would call herso
  
  'herso' should have a space
  
  xo Zynneh xo

  Author's response

  Hi and thanks for the proofread. Like I said I don't have Microsoft word and not to mention I have nails (:
  
  It's hard to type on Notepad...
  But thanks anyway.

• You Get Under My Damn Skin.

  (#) lostmyfearoffalling 2009-05-31

  Ha. This is an interesting concept. New. I like it.
  
  And I feel your pain with notepad. I don't have word either.....and it sucks.
  
  Nice job! Can't wait to see what happens.

  Author's response

  Hi (:
  
  Thank so much, i'm glad people like this. I know it's such a pain. Now I know what to ask for my birthday in 2 months lol.
  
  
  Thanks again!

• You Get Under My Damn Skin.

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-06-13

  Hm..I have to wonder if Frank would actually do that, too XD
  
  Man..that Ashley is a hard one.. Ha, totally just thought of something..but anyway, great story XD
  
  REVENGE
  
  
  And if you notice, I'm not particularly picky about the spelling or grammar usage or what not :o)

  Author's response

  Hi Revenge (:
  
  Yes, I think we all do lol.
  
  Ashley is a very tough cookie, indeed. :)
  
  Oh and thanks, i'm not extremely picky either, but if someone wants to make a couple suggestions, I try to keep an open mind ya know?
  
  Thank you for all of your reviews! I appreciate it!

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