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Changed Consequences
(#) Magnatron 2006-04-23
Hi I'm the one that rated your story exciting. I'm realy enjoying this story, and can't wait to read more; however I have one problem with it. I am a Roman Catholic, and dislike swearing, to an extreme. If you insist on continuing to swear then I will stop reading. Please stop swearing I really like this.
God bless you.
I am the Eggman!Changed Consequences
(#) meg_ann 2006-05-16
I also rated your story as Exciting, although it doesn't appear to be showing up... hm. Well, in any case, I believe it's exciting, and that's important also, yes? I love the idea, and I really agree that had Richie been exposed to more metagas (as he was in the finale) his powers would be much stronger.
And in response to your other reviwer, I don't think that you should alter your writing style at all. First of all, censorship is annoying. Secondly, I didn't even really notice the swearing, so it wasn't distracting at all, and that's the important part.
I like your writing style.Changed Consequences
(#) Quillian 2006-06-03
Well, you reviewed my Static Shock fanfic, so I'm reviewing yours. :)
Really interesting and insightful AU fic. Can't wait to see where it will go.
Also, in response to your first reviewer... you shouldn't change something in a fic just because someone says something like "I'd like it better if such-and-such..." I hate that kind of censorship, where someone tells you how your fic should be written because they don't like some detail in it. As the old saying goes, you can't please everyone. As for the swearing, I never even noticed it to begin with.
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