- First great way to quell not only the denizens of the forest but Snape and
Hagrid as well. I think if you had say had hermione also trained by say an old
flame and rival of Sinanju, maybe a more ninja like training too. Then as the
story goes on have the two masters meet back .
Here I see how you've molded Hermione w/o the influence of canon Harry or Ron
here. Her cadre of friends would IMHo occurred had not the trio befriended
Kudos and I hope you use Hermione later on in another story to be Harry's rock
and rival of sorts too.
Wonder who's gonna end up with Luna in this one!
- Another great chapter.
I am waiting for Hermione to go into research mode about Harry's background. She then learns the 33 points on a man...
So Voldie is in Fleur's body, keeping the men away and using women for satisfaction...
Why do I get the feeling that Harry will use his special technique to literally fry Voldies brain, and free Fleur?
(#) jabarber69 2009-06-24First off, thank you for updating what has got to be one of my all time favorite hp fanfiction stories on the net!
Now where to start...all those snivellus episodes were outstanding as well as the wrong hole ones too! love what he did to macnair and his buddies in slime! and oh yeah me being a guy I would love to have an allure to attract not to mention have a sure fired method of scoring with women that makes them line up in droves for my services! and want ole chiun be happy he now has 3 contracts for the same job! so I take it ole remo will arrive just in time to help harry with his little problem that lucy is setting up, and that will be the perfect time for ole snivellus to expire from the mortal plane! and whats with ole dumbydork, he hired a killer so why is he so broken up about what his killer is doing!?!
I sure hope you update this again this year...hell hopefully you might even updated more than once again this year...Isure hope soooo!
- Most amusing. I like the Mr. Who line and Harry's disappointment at making a noise on the deaddrop. Shows he's still learning. Malfoy getting smacked was great, as well as Snape's slimey character coming out. The fact that you have taken what Dumbledore allowed to happen in the school, in the books, overboard to highlight what was wrong in the first place is what I truly enjoyed the most, Harry's verbal smackdown of MacGonagall said it all. I'm just surprised loud mouth Ron hasn't made a reappearance. Can't wait for the brothers to be reunited.
Author's response- Ron will be returning and his attitude explained 'in story'.
- Excellent chapter -- so we have Harry and Remo against trolls, dementors (unless that was giant's name?) and Lucy, with snape in reserve. Should be a fun next chapter
Author's response- I was wondering if anyone would notice the Gurg's name... Should have known it would be you Doc.
- Yeah, four trolls and three giants. I've got a little scene playing in my head that makes me wish this was a visual medium.
- Oh, but Remo isn't there to help Harry. He'll be on the sidelines making snarky comments... Unless Harry gets into trouble.
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