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• Holly Evans and the Spiral Path

  (#) tallica343 2009-07-17

  I guess since I don't know how things actually happened when Holly was taken so I can't really say too much, but I wonder why they never gave McGonagall a communication device knowing that they would need her and time was of the essence.

  Author's response

  As a matter of timing, it wouldn't have mattered. Holly was lured into the ambush Sunday afternoon while McG was still out greeting new muggleborn students. Originally I wrote it as Hermione making four coins with one for McG, but explaining it would have taken more time at both ends- how she got it and why she couldn't respond immediately. I doubt any of them expected Pansy to be activating it so soon.
  Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  wh

• Holly Evans and the Spiral Path

  (#) adamwild1 2009-07-20

  First I would like to say this story
  ROCKS!!!
  
  I can not believe the low ratings this story has. I have read just about every story in hp universe thats worth reading and yours stacks up with the best of them.
  
  Im looking forward to the rest of the story, like most great reads, in hopes it dosent end.

  Author's response

  Very kind words. As to why the rating is low, the ficwad engine has slipped a gear and doesn't show the Rate this Story link at the bottom. The rate the overall story, go to the address bar in your browser while looking at the navigation page, add /Rate to the end of the address and let fly.
  This story stands as well as it does (in my opinion) because it has an end in mind. The good news is we aren't half way there yet. The bad news is I'm not half way there yet.
  
  wh

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