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• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-07-30

  Ahhhhh!
  How did I not see that other chapter update??
  Ughh.
  
  Whatever.
  Amazing!
  Both!
  
  Pete's loosing control.
  It's intense.
  
  I kinda feel bad for Brenny.
  It's not his falt Pete has a kickass power and he doesn't. :p
  
  William still remains a bitch.
  Nothing personal (NO not an atl reference).
  
  Lovved it!
  Update soon.
  -Natalie

  Author's response

  Don't worry - sometimes the stories slip off the first page pretty quick but mostly they don't so normally you wouldn't need to go looking! :)
  
  Brendon, does actually have that power (it's that weird dance senquence in the video just before Patraick get's taken down). I doubt he even realises that Pete has it too. I'm not sure if Beckett knows, but I kinda have in mind that it's a power that is passed on from the one who turns you, so maybe he does?
  
  I actually feel sorry for Brendon for a different reason - if Beckett just owned up and told him why he's so desperate to get Pete under his control, he wouldn't be so paranoid!
  
  Will update soon!
  
  Thanks for the review!!
  Sas x

• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) xcharlottee 2009-07-31

  i know i havent been reviewing every chapter, but i have been following along, and this is an amazing story.
  
  you have so many different conflicts plus the intensity of pete's bloodlust.
  
  update soon !

  Author's response

  Heya!! I'm really glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the compliment!
  
  Yeah, I tend to have more than 1 theme running in my stories (I write MCR stuff as Sassy) mostly because I like everyone to have 'something to do' rather than just being 'also there'. Sometimes that's difficult as there aren't enough plot points to go around, but I do my best.
  
  I have a strange feeling this could easily turn into a series - I wonder how people would feel about that?
  
  This is my first FOB fic, I don't know what people like or don't like yet.
  
  Thanks for the review
  Sas x

• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-02

  Oh my jizzus! It seems..that Patrick has a little control over Pete? At least that's what it looked like, at first :)
  
  I can't believe Joe is gonna go through with this! ARG! I just wanna climb into the story and scream "It's a trap!!!" ya know?
  
  REVENGE

  Author's response

  Yeah, poor Joe, he's so desperate to help his friends he can't see this for what it is. They've already shown they're waiting for him.
  
  Thanks, as ever for the review.
  Sas x

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