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• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-06

  Ah, that was pretty stupid of Brenden. :) Yay! I think Pete would be a better second, especially if he tricked William into thinking that he was all evil-doer and shit and then totally ruining his life XD
  
  Anyway..:) Luffffffed it!
  
  REVENGE

  Author's response

  Ah but to go that, he'd have to kill Patrick. You don't REALLY want that do you?
  Besides, I have something much more evil in mind >:-]
  
  Thanks for the review!!
  
  Sas x

• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) charliexbrown 2009-08-06

  WOOOOO! A way to stop the plan! xD
  I really hope Joe manages to convince Andy too... but more than ever I wanna know if Patrick's still alive! AGH the suspense is driving me nuts!! (eats own skin)
  ...And that's why you should continue! :D

  Author's response

  Don't forget, it's mid morning at this point, so Pete's still asleep. But our heroes were wrapped up warm with jackets and sweatshirts. So I'm guessing late autumn. Won't be too long before the sun sets!
  
  Whatever Brendon and Spencer do, they risk William's wrath. Wonder what they'll do....?
  
  Andy wants to believe Joe but right now he's so angry and upset - not just with Joe but with everything that's happened and there doesn't seem to be a way out.
  Joe will do his best, we'll just have to hope it's enough!
  
  Please don't eat too much of yourself!! I need you tobe able to read (and hopefully review) the rest of the story!! :D
  
  thanks for reviewing!!
  Sas x

• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-08-06

  Lovvvved it!!!
  
  Ahh.
  Brenny Boy, why so stupid? Don't complain about a problem that was your falt in the first place. :l
  
  William is being a douche as usual.
  Nothing new there.
  
  And poor Joe!!!! D:
  Andy, be nice.
  
  And what ever happend to Trick?! I'm dying here.
  All these cliffies.
  Ahh.
  Amazing update!
  Update soooon. :)
  -Natalie

  Author's response

  I'm really glad you're still enjoying it!
  
  Dear, lovely Patrick will figure in the next chapter, I promise.
  There are some tough decisions to be made by our heroes and their enemies. If I write it well enough, it's going to get tense.
  
  Thanks for reviewing!!
  Sas x

• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) nadialexandra 2009-08-08

  I no longer have any nails, thanks to you. Jesus Christ, Sas; suspense much?! Shit. I nearly pissed myself when I got to the end and didn't get to know what happens to Patrick. (He's been my obsession for five years- I'm entitled to be worried.) Although I get your point... Pete's still sleeping, so it'd berather uneventful to go back to that scene, unless we all want to hear Patrick's scared relief that he gets to live a bit longer. And, dammit, I don't care if Pete doesn't want it for Patrick- I still think he should just drain him for the blood and turn him so he doesn't die. It's going to happen eventually, right? (Because, shit, Andy can't get the story straight and Joe's being beaten down. The only hope the have is Brendon and Spencer's plan working. But do they even have a plan yet?) Pete would never kill Patrick, but he's really considering it due to his thirst. So he doesn't die and Pete gets his first drink... I think that'sthe way to go. 'cause then they can both fight their way out of there. Woot for teamwork!
  
  ...that was long. O_o
  
  And yeah. Andy needs to chill the fuck out and listen to Joe. And Joe... needs to stop getting abused. -_-"
  
  
  xoxo
  nadia

  Author's response

  Lol!! Your reviews always make me chuckle!!
  
  You're right, Andy does need to calm down and listen to Joe. Lets hope he can convince him!
  
  Now then, what can Brendon and Spencer do? You wouldn't believe it if I told you. But all will be revealed in due course.
  
  I should apologise for leaving poor Patrick in a terrible and terrifying situation and then not even mentioning him in this chapter. But hey, you know I'm a meanie sometimes!! Lol! Dear lovely Trick will feature in the next chapter, I promise.
  
  Oh but what about Andrea? Only Joe knows about her. If they do escape, would they risk almost certain re-capture to help her? And if Joe can't fully convince Andy, how would he take a suggestion to go into the heart of the mansion to Beckett's room?
  
  And poor Pete. You know, if he wakes with anything at all except blood on his mind, it'll be a miracle! And the big question - if he drinks human blood, what will happen with his humanity? Will it leave him? If he turns Patrick can anyone guarantee he won't wake up evil? But assuming he doesn't what kind of anguish will Pete suffer by turning his best friend into the very thing he hates about himself? Could he forgive himself? Could Patrick?
  
  All will be revealed soon!
  
  Thanks again for reviewing!!
  Sas x
  
  Ps - chapter 12 is up, but I have the strangest feeling it won't settle your mind any ;)
  Sorry!
  
  Evil Sas x

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