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Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos
(#) Fuzzball 2006-04-09
Just some errors I saw. Side not site. Canine is a dog, feline is a cat. tongue not tong. Last is to, too, two i.e. too much not to much. Anyway this is a very good start, quite an enjoyable read.Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos
(#) Black_s_Phoenix 2006-04-11
Not great but not bad. Original idea and I shall wait to see how it will start.Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos
(#) Shaggy37 2006-04-28
my guess is Jules because if this was real I would date her, very nicely done and damn was that a good story, I can't wait for the next chapter:):)Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos
(#) DJ32 2006-12-18
I don't know when You updated last but I hope you do soon. I think this is grate.Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos
(#) jedielfsorcerer 2007-08-27
this is cool story. keep it up. what is the other's animagus forms? you didn't say.Harry Potter and the American Elite Commandos
(#) Vampyre5201 2007-12-18
keep up the good work, orignial like the story
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