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Searching for the Power
(#) chanewt906 2009-08-17
i liked it, fluff or not. Harry needs some down time, not to mention the rest of them.
Keep up the excellent work!Searching for the Power
(#) firelord 2009-08-17
i agrey with chanewt906 fluff or not it was a fantastic chapter thank you for sharing please update again a.s.a.l.a.Searching for the Power
(#) Quackpotty 2009-08-17
Yay! He's found out who closet-girl was! Yeehah! Does Daphne and Blaise's contract have to go through? Oh well. Great chapter, anyway. It was kinda fun to see Harry behaving like that. It's more reminiscent of the earlier chapters. He's become more moody since Gabby's death, but this chapter returns Harry to the giggly character he was when he thought he was going insane.
I did see that you were editing the earlier chapters, what with the story moving to the front of the update list. One of the things I've noticed in your earlier chapters (I'm rereading the story at the mo) is that you frequently had a sentence start, placed a full-stop, then completed the original thought in a new sentence where it should have been a simple comma. I suppose that you've noticed that and you're busy fixing what you do see. Thanks for the effort that it takes to do that, esp what with the fighting that you need to do on this site with the site admin. Thanks also for the effort that you've put into the story.Searching for the Power
(#) DragonWing 2009-08-17
It looks like Harry's coming full circle in his emotions. His giddy, and somewhat silly self emerging from the dark, and it's confusing people...but this time it's the slytherins and not his closest friends who have gotten used to it by now.
And now the closet girl is revealed. Howdy Daphne. So arranged marriage and the like, so ?Blaise isn't interested in Daphne and Daphne is apparently extremely interested in Harry. Her sister remains an engima to me as she shifts from suspicious to child-like in a heartbeat, but that makes her unique.
Good job overall.Searching for the Power
(#) Nautilus 2009-08-17
christmas is a time for fluff... blaise not swinging that way?
i have a few doubts about susan's future... are we about to loose another member of the group? or will the bones residence be attacked with possibly injuries for both susan and madam bones?
what did harry get ginny and hermione? or even padma and parvati?Searching for the Power
(#) DJ32 2009-08-17
Yay He found out who closet-girl was. Daphne was a good choice, I guess Blaise is a pouf o-well bad for him good for Harry nice job. Also nice work making x-mas happy thnks for that see ya next time.Searching for the Power
(#) issabissa 2009-08-17
Loved the chapter!!! YOu did a great job here! Keep up the great work!Searching for the Power
(#) The_Wolf 2009-08-18
Once again, another good chapter. Once again, Pansy gets stuck on the back burner.if you want to draw it out, put it closer to the forefront.
Daphne. What's wrong with having a little, what was the term? Skin between friends? a mutual understanding can be reached, I think. Just PLEASE for the love of all things good, don't involve Blaise in their relaxation sessions.
Susan. I don't like the eerie vibes I'm getting here. She gets together with him, then she leaves reluctantly. The Dork Lord is still on the loose and guess who a prime target is?
A very good chapter here. Keep it up. Do you really have to end it?
Searching for the Power
(#) Mr7 2009-08-19
Good work, as always. Keep it up, I hope you update soon.Searching for the Power
(#) BlueWillow 2009-08-20
very good. more please. I cant wait for the next chapter!
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