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Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2009-11-01
Well I'd already read most of these scenes on CaerAzkaban, but I just had to comment briefly on that last scene, or more specifically, the final two paragraphs. Utterly hilarious! I also liked Tony's blunt honesty with Harry concerning his feelings for Julie.
Looking forward to more.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) DarkeGray 2009-11-01
Whew, glad to see an update on this, its been a while since you've updated in this site. I have to say I really loved the last part with the goblins. I had a hard time not laughing out loud in class when I read it. Hope to see more of this and your other stories as well.
DGHarry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) Jden 2009-11-01
An enjoyable story and unlike DarkeGray I did laugh out loud reading the last goblin statement.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) Cateagle 2009-11-01
While I've seen this individually on CaerAzkaban, I enjoyed reading the full chapter here. I have to admit that I loved seeing Tony as the "helping" father with the Cub Scout competitions (reminded me of my father, though he was nowhere near as competitive - then again there wasn't anything like the Stark/Reed competition to spur things on). The scenes of his friends and colleagues over Christmas were fascinating (I do wonder who the un-named young witch was, I'm hazarding a guess it was Tracey). I wonder what Draco would say if he knew that what happened to his father was punishment for the evil his father tried? I suspect both he and Narcissa would be appallaed. The final scene witht he Goblins was fascinating and you know that, with a lead in like that, Harry's going to be unable to resist studying Goblin culture - if for no other reason than to see if he's was having his leg pulled there. I do wonder what the combination of his Potter heritage and his Stark heritage will produce as they combine; the one certainty being that he'll be for the Light, though not necessarily as Dumbles sees the Light.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) KEmperor 2009-11-01
Just finished reading what you have posted here so far, I really enjoyed it. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) MonCappy 2009-11-01
I liked this chapter. I do want to respond to another reviewer here, though. The unnamed witch can't be Tracy since she is staying with the Granger family over the holidays.Author's response
- Actually Tracey was only over at the Grangers for the day, which was several days earlier than the family meeting over dinner at the unnamed witch's home, who may or may not be Tracey...Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) mrpietan 2009-11-01
Damn good to see an update ... well done .. :)Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) erik 2009-11-02
Great chapter, but a little annoying/distracting trying to figure out the unnamed characters.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) Pointer 2009-11-02
"You’re going to have to stalk and capture your mate just like everyone else."
Absolutely hilarious.
Had to stop and take laugh breaks.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) DrT 2009-11-02
Nice update, with little bits of mystery to build off of. Glad Harry is learning some 'facts of life', and that Sirius is becoming more adult as well!
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