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Demolition Lovers
19 reviewsSomething original that I wrote for my Creative Writing class. I wanted to know what you guys thought :)
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Demolition Lovers
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-11-12
Oh my, I wasn't really expecting the end! Well I expected something big and the whatnot...just not that...or something.
But anyway, I really like it. (; It sorta made my stomach drop at the end. Cute.
F oxox.Author's response
Really? All right!! xD
I was really hoping that the beginning didn't give anything away :) I'm sure I'll get a good grade then LoL
Thanks for reviewing, Love!
XoXoDemolition Lovers
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-11-12
awwww this was so cute, it kinda reminds me of the book "The Giver" except the giver is boring and this was amazing :] I actually have to go do writing homework now off i go haha.
LUFF YOU!!!!Author's response
"The Giver" was a good book. I wonder if they ever wrote a sequel?
I was kind of aiming for a little bit of Romeo and Juliet, just cos of the end an' all. My teacher said I wasn't allowed to kill anyone off, but technically I ended it before that happened xD
SNEAKY!
I luff choo mooooooreeeee!Demolition Lovers
(#) shehadtheworld12 2009-11-12
Amazing!! I loved the ending!!!
It was cute. I agree with the above^^ (:
Luff it.
Author's response
Thank you!!
huggles
I'm really glad you all like it, oh faithful readers that you are :)Demolition Lovers
(#) areyounormal 2009-11-13
That was excellent! All the way through I was thinking that they should run away together, but there was nowhere for them to go and that was so sad. The ending was perfect. Well done!! Very imaginitive!!
Let us know what your teacher thought
Sas xAuthor's response
Thank you Sas :)
As soon as I find out, I'll let everyone know, I promise!Demolition Lovers
(#) Larka 2009-11-13
awesome!!!!! :D that was cool,crap i have to go eat food now! good story!
giggles! :D
tomgirl567 :DAuthor's response
Thank you!!
I hope you enjoy your food xDDemolition Lovers
(#) mysilentromance 2009-11-13
The ending was absolutely perfect! It was so unexpected =]
Hope you get a good grade on this because this is amazing!Author's response
Aw, thank you!
I really hope so too. But like I told Sas up there, I promise to update you guys when I get my grade back :)Demolition Lovers
(#) TheChemicalRose 2009-11-17
sobs but they were so cute! And young!
Damn that was good .I would have read and reviewed it sooner if I had known,sorry.
Luv it,
Ur stalker
~Addie~Author's response
Ah, my faithful stalker returns! :) I knew you couldn't resist meh -puffs up like a blowfish-
I am so weird sometimes.. It's not even funny!
But thank you, hunny :) I'll try and write soon. Gotta come up with how I'm going to put you in it first though!
xDDemolition Lovers
(#) browser18 2009-11-18
Wow! What an amazing idea!! It's a brilliant twist on an old tale and I'm so glad you wrote it! Very sweet. How did you do on the paper? I hope your teacher was more than impressed! Great job! xoxo HarleyAuthor's response
Aaah, thank you!
It was kind of hard to write it, to be honest. Even though it may look easy. But then again.. stories always look easy when they're done and posted LoL
Thank you, Harley!Demolition Lovers
(#) doyleangel 2009-11-18
wow, that was an intense story. it was soo good thoughAuthor's response
Thankies!
I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)Demolition Lovers
(#) gnrgirl 2009-11-19
Wow, That was epic. I'm not even kidding you, I absolutely LOVED it. You, my friend, are a very talented writer. Keep it up :)Author's response
Haha thank you so much! I'm really glad you loved it :) Epic is good, definitely good. And I got a good grade on it too! I am a very happy chipmunk xD
But you're more talented?
:)
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