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Something original that I wrote for my Creative Writing class. I wanted to know what you guys thought :)
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Demolition Lovers
(#) gnrgirl 2009-11-20
You're welcome!
I am not more talented than you!! :) I think we're equally talented!
And I'm glad you did good on it!Demolition Lovers
(#) VendettaEmma 2009-11-22
....speachless. That was...great! I luffed it! :-)
x,
emmaAuthor's response
I'm so happy you luffed it! Just like I'm happy that everyone uses that word with my work:)
In case you're curious.. I got full credit on it LoL
LUFF CHOO!Demolition Lovers
(#) Angel_wing364 2009-11-27
Very good! It was so touching...and sad...but I loved it! Good job!Author's response
Thank you :)
I'm glad you loved it, because I absolutely loved writing it! It amazes me sometimes.. how you can start with a simple idea and write something out of it xD
Sorry.. I'm a bit "off" today LoL listening to music and writing :)
ARDemolition Lovers
(#) xkristinaxrawrx 2009-11-28
It almost made me cry. It was so well written and I just loved every minute of it.
Well done!Author's response
!!! Thank you !!!
Yours made me get that feeling in my stomach that something horrible was going to happen, and then as I kept on reading the feeling just got worse. I had to put my brownie down LoLDemolition Lovers
(#) Stephanie1990 2010-01-01
Wow, i mean, i almost screamed NO!! out loud in the end, nice... very nice.
luv it.Author's response
Thank you :)
I'm glad you didn't scream, though...Demolition Lovers
(#) MCRmygirl 2011-01-22
This was very interesting. I've never read anything quite like it before. It was... unique. Ver good.
Oh who am I kidding? I can't sound like a business woman. It was FANTABULOUS! XD
~Fallen Avenging AngelAuthor's response
Thanks so much:)
I'm glad you liked it so much. And yeah, no business woman for you :PDemolition Lovers
(#) WritersAmmo 2012-06-23
I loved that you didn't switch tenses all the time. I find that so distracting.
Thank you for being a great writer, I love your stories!!!Author's response
You're very welcome! I think that's the first time anyone's ever thanked me for being a great (good) writer. It tickles my insides.
Oh, and the switching of the tenses? Yeah, that distracts me as well - and pisses me off to the point of not reading what I'm reading anymore. It's also kind of disappointing. But what can you do, right? :)Demolition Lovers
(#) GotSparkle 2012-08-09
Loved it!
That awkward moment when my name is Ashlyn.....Author's response
Ashlyn is such a beautiful name. :P
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