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You'll Always Be With Me
7 reviewsSometimes you have to let go of the ones you love most, and trust they will be free.
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You'll Always Be With Me
(#) Moonshyne 2009-11-14
Hi there,
That was absolutely beautiful and had me all teary eyed at the end.
They way you wrote how Emilie was feeling as a mother who's child was dying was absolutely stunning. How hard it was in the end to let go but knowing it was the right thing to do.
It's not fair to keep someone who has no hope of recovering alive and in pain. Emilie truly did what was best for her daughter even though it wasn't the best for her. The true sign of love and unselfishness.
I started crying when Lyndsey told her story how a child had been saved by her daughters heart, the one thing that kept going in the end.
Though it never takes the pain away I'm sure it still helped knowing a piece of her was still alive and keeping someone that way too.
Simply amazing and heartwrenching!!Author's response
Hi Moonshyne,
Thank you for the compliments, I really did cry while writing this, it's very emotional one for me..
Exactly, sometimes you have to what your heart says and let someone go to know they will be pain free and in peace. Emilie definitely had to make a huge choice, but she knew it was a good one.
When Lindsey came in, I rewrote it so many times, wondering if people would like it, but you always prove me wrong!
I'm glad you and everyone who reviewed liked it. It means alot to me. Again, thanks for all of you reviews.
xoxoYou'll Always Be With Me
(#) SmashAuthority2 2009-11-14
Oh my goodness! This was BRILLIANT. I loved it, it was so moving. You did an excallant job. Well done. xxAuthor's response
Thank you!! That really means alot.
xoxoYou'll Always Be With Me
(#) mysilentromance 2009-11-14
Aw that was so touching! You did an excellent job portraying how pain on someone's behalf can actually bring happiness to someone like a stranger (in a good way) It was sweet how Hailey's death meant saving someone else's child.
This was amazing =]Author's response
Thank you! You hit it right on the nail (:
I appreciate your reviews (:
xoxoYou'll Always Be With Me
(#) Larka 2009-11-14
gosh I'm crying now, I'm not even kidding I'm crying that was so sad but i loved it. awesome job. :D
tomgirl567 :SAuthor's response
Aww I'm sorry, I did as well so I feel your pain.
But thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it.
xoxoYou'll Always Be With Me
(#) EmoParader 2009-11-14
Awwuh, that was beautiful :)
I didn't cry, so I don't have to make out with an old man any time soon, but it did make me sad. Congrats :)
That poor mama.. If I ever have kids (which I plan on) and they get cancer, I'm gonna do everything I possibly could to make sure they live in fun for the time being (before I have to let them go). But hopefully it doesn't happen :) Cancer doesn't run in my family, so eh..
Sorry I started rambling!Author's response
Lol I don't think I would want you to lol. Yeah I agree, I would do the same thing. It doesn't run in my family either...at least I hope not...
Thank you xD
xoxoYou'll Always Be With Me
(#) EmoParader 2009-11-14
Oh and erm, this is my other account :)
_Amy_Revenge_ is my main one, but it doesn't have any rating points so I'm using this one for a bit xDAuthor's response
Oh okay cool (:You'll Always Be With Me
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-11-14
This had me blind at the end! The tears were sitting in my eyes.
I liked how it wasn't all "kladjfdaklfjdsalk-death-nhdsfasjdkfshd-suicide" well, you get what I mean! I love this. (:
F oxox.Author's response
Aww me too. It was real emotional to write, but I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks again for the review. It is much appreciated (:
xoxo
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