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• My Love

  (#) VendettaEmma 2009-12-20

  You have something here. Don't let typos, or grammatic errors get in the way of your success. You should also try spacing things up a bit, maybe even make this lenghtier.
  I would love to read more!
  -Emma

  Author's response

  thanks! =]
  ill try to think about you tips when i write the next chapter.
  xoxo-Mikayla

• My Love

  (#) hey_nena 2009-12-20

  I agree with the above reviewer.
  
  Also, one thing that helps me is reading what I write out loud. That usually helps me catch typos, etc.
  
  I will definitely read another chapter.

  Author's response

  thank you for your tips.=]
  im glad to know you would read chapter two.
  it means a lot to me
  XOXO-Mikayla

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