(#) deaths-destruction 2010-02-21This reminds me of The Picture of Dorian Gray. I liked that book. And this story was well written, but a tip; space out the paragraphs a bit. I kept losing my place, lol. 'Twas good though. I liked it. Ish it a one-shot or a story?
Author's responseSorry it's taken me so long to respond. I'm naturally slow. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it. It was a oneshot, though I've been considering continuing it, since people have asked.
(#) ShotGunSinner 2010-05-25This was so beautiful, thank you for writing a Ryden or Rydon shrug that didnt end with death and sadness. This was perfect and makes me hapy :D I agree paragraphing would be good but thats not too big hehehehe.
I think this is great as a oneshot, sometimes when things become longer than a oneshot the story seems dragged on you know? I love this how it is, thank you so much!
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