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He Needs a Vacation
(#) IlovetheCoreys 2010-08-09
Brilliant! I like it. :) Very well-written, too.
Keep up your awesome, super-cool, very brilliant and creative writing! :)Author's response
Thank you! :DHe Needs a Vacation
(#) DragonSilk 2011-06-06
The shift from second person to first person was a little bit disconcerting. Maybe divide it by chapters in the future to lessen that a little?
But overall I thought this was adorably fluffy. It was a nice little read.Author's response
Thank you ^^ I was originally in separate chapters, I kind of got lazy with reposting after I organized my account.
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