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Chapter 2
23 reviewsAfter he dies, Harry finds himself in another place and finds he has a decision to make.
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JEDI POTTER
(#) scoutie01 2013-11-23
was so enjoying this story until a second wife was mentioned and not immediately rebuffed. sobAuthor's response
Heya scoutie.
That was the second chapter! Please read on. You’ll find it is strictly H/Hr throughot until the last chapter and my reasons for inviting a third are explained. If you don’t like the idea of a three way marriage, just stop reading before the epilogue.
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(#) morcheller 2017-07-04
At this point, chapter two, I have to ask why, with all the others present from the varying ages, did Tom Riddle himself not make an appearance? Obviously, he must be among the dead, and he is a very interested party to the discussion so, why not?JEDI POTTER
(#) JRTaylor 2020-08-19
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...How many lash marks across my back? How many rapes?...
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RAPES!? Dude, what the fuck!? You've crossed into some seriously mind maiming territory here! How are you going to justify Harry having any concept of love or ability to have intimacy if he's been raped through his childhood?
I don't think you've done the research or you'd learn that almost every case of child molestation leaves life-long debilitating trauma - trauma that most commonly manifests itself as fear of anything sexually intimate and loathing of any feelings or urges towards physical intimacy. Many children close themselves off to the point of mental breaks, including psychopathic behavior.
You've created a Harry Potter that may say he loves Hermione, but will almost certainly never be able to express that love directly to her (knowing he would be dead when - IF - she heard his message is Not the same), let alone be in any way physical with her. disappointed
Wow, James Potter is a heartless, souless fuckwad. He cares about his son about one cup full of spit more than dumblemort.
dumblemort in the same afterlife as the 'good' people means that there is no judgement and no consequence for your actions in life. It is confirmation that "might makes right", "cheating is just trying your own way", and countless other anti-social and avaricious slogans are, in fact, completely justified.
You could just as easily have talked about the old fuck as to directly include him and therefore destroy the concept of an afterlife.
I'm completely confused. How can you bring up "Hell" and have what I brought up above regarding dumblemort? You are completely contradicting yourself.
I do like that Harry knows the Codes, that's the first thing that has made me smile.
The debate with Yoda was pretty fun, and well written.
The inclusion of Ginny in with H/Hr is bothersome. She would need to go through extreme cranial-rectal inversion to be any kind of partner. That said, she would fulfil the role of Lady Black, which would demand a Pureblood marriage.
I've also always liked the idea of the seventh child, first witch born in seven generations, to be more powerful magically.
The chapter close with Harry receiving 'the Force' and its attendant information then fade to black was well done.
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