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An all to Real Vision
5 reviewsIt was hard to tell her surroundings the vision itself blared a bright violet. It kept repeating, it wouldn't stop! She saw the girl in her vision begin to slowly die once more and her eyes burned ...
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Awake in a Dream
(#) Pheonee 2006-05-27
I love your style! Kinda thick and...and rich, like caramel icecream, but it's crisp and makes me laugh too. And I agree, poor Odie! collasps from laughter YOu could make it a little clearer who's speaking and who's listening...Author's response
Thank you. I'll try to do that.Awake in a Dream
(#) 999 2006-06-23
..............................................................................................................couldn't understandproperly....stuff happened too fastAuthor's response
oh sorry.
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