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69 Aspirin
(#) mysilentromance 2010-08-22
Wow that was really great. I loved the way you described everything.
This was really well done.69 Aspirin
(#) Paramour 2010-08-22
I like how it's disjointed. The thought processes are a little messy, and his story's a little out of whack. I really liked how you included the consideration of the mundane, like borrowing Ray's pen and cleaning up puke, and then made him backtrack so he was wondering why on earth he was thinking about those things in the first place. Having been suicidal once or twice, I can understand where he's coming from, and it makes the whole story about ten times better.
Commendable job. (: Also, the formatting is interesting (off-topic XD)
-Allie69 Aspirin
(#) ParanoiaDestroyah 2011-04-07
Crying tears of "OH MY GOD, DON'T DO THIS, GEE!" and "YAY! You're chickening out!!!" I really like your stories, by the way.69 Aspirin
(#) MCRmygirl 2011-04-12
I'm about to cry in the middle of Tech class... thanks. I read this awhile ago, and just re-read it without remembering how sad it is...69 Aspirin
(#) annabel-lee 2011-05-10
This is REALLY good. Not just the story itself but the way it was written. It's almost as if you're right there with Gerard, you can read as he writes, you can tell what he's thinking, but he has no clue you're there. Like you're just a ghost alongside him.
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