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Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) misteryman526 2010-09-24
Good work! I find your characters are behaving much more believably than their canon counterparts. It always annoyed me that Professor Snape was supposed to be the quintessential Slytherin yet was always acting like an uncultured bore. I'm looking forward to further installments of your work!Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) juggler196 2010-09-26
Wow, what a good story. I like the pace (not too slow, but not too fast), the idea (original, but definitely believable), and the writing style. My favorite part is that you changed something small at the beginning and did a good job of letting the story develop at a natural pace from there. One of the best stories Ive read, please update soon!:-)Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) StephanieJ 2010-10-17
A very well done Smart!Harry story. I like the Ravenclaw!Neville twist. Also, the whole Harry/Hermione let's make friends pact.
Looking forward to more.Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) WHCnelson 2010-11-21
I like this story... It gives a different aspect to the HP story line that I enjoy... Keep it up and update soon...Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) reader3 2010-12-05
I like this story. Your reasoning behind Harry not trusting adults is good, yet you don't keep harping on it. Same with the studying. You gave us a schedule, but didn't describe everything he learned. Rather you're letting us see what he learned through his interactions with others. I love it!Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) mgenna 2011-01-18
This is a common sense pays story. I hope that you continue it. It is refreshing.Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) Jeram 2011-01-30
Well, it's not bad, but I wish you hadn't gone straight to so many cliches early on... you know, Harry Evans, astounding the Goblins with politeness, ridiculous shopping trip, insidious Dumbledore. I'd rather see something new, and so far the Hogwarts part itself is the best bit - the first part of the story was like many stories I've read before.Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) ca53buckeye 2011-03-28
Any chance that you can revisit this marvelous idea. It is like watching events unfold for the very first time that JK did it. I am entranced and will be checking my emails daily for notification that an update had arrived. Thank you for your well-plotted characters.Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) Hytekrednek 2011-09-24
I have to agree with all of the reviews so far. I have truly enjoyed your story so far and really look forward to the rest of it. I see that it has been a while since you have updated and hope that nothing bad is going on and it is just that you have been busy with the real world and work.
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