- Wow! A dramatic battle indeed. Dumbledore is right, given that Voldemort is now more dark creature than man (especially considering what making the Horacruxes did to him), it is logical that charms against dark creatures would be effective against them.
I wish I could feel sorry for Wormtail but I can't. He found the wrong time to remember his Gryffindor courage and boldness.
As for the rest, I wonder how Hermione will react to having a landed aristocrat as a boyfriend? She is a middle-class girl and fairly down-to-earth. Could she adapt to being lady of the manor?
BenRG's Rating: 8/10
Author's responseThe British upper-middle class always used to have a desire to mingle with the nobs (lessened these days of course). Still, I'm sure Hermione will manage. If Harry has Muggle tenent farmers, I'm sure they'll be visited by Lady Hermione
- Enjoying the heck out of the story, so far. Im generally not one of the people who make out detailed reviews, but in this case, a point of order.
The comment, "You see a horrific being, knowing that it is a mass murderer, who wants you, your family, your friends, your world, and at the moment your boyfriend all dead, and all you can feel is disgusted? That says a lot about your courage."
Hermione is presented as being the most intelligent witch of her generation, perhaps in decades. Yet, instead of Ravenclaw, she's sorted into Gryffindor. The girl must be even braver that she is brainy.
That's almost scary. Under the right circumstances she should be a lioness.
Just thought I'd comment.
Keep up the good work.
Author's responseI agree, but I think the people around her would just see the brains until she does something to remind them of her courage as well
- I have not read it all, at chapter 8, that I really do not finish I have to said a couple of things:
1. There is a lot of waisted words by trying to redeem the trash bin(ron). When someone due to what ever reason betray you or stap youon the back, you move out and leave him or kill him. He has nothing to safe simple he is another bigot but aparently too many think his something else.
2. Again you make the rapist be seen as someone one, hey he sold his parent to snake face. But following that same thinking why you do not save malfoy? Yeah no answer for that so some rapist most dye but the one who sold your parent mostbe save an stupid two face thought.
3. The way you make H/HR relatin is really stupid, you even let slip she was atracted to the trash bin. They are a couple or not, what you make them look stupid no matter what you think when you write this.
4. It is clear Harry knows Dumb as an ass is making him a weapon that need to dye at the end, and you spect anybody will agree with it and keep wofking with the ass.
5. He has a greate manor that is also well protected and you remove HR parent or at least that what you hint, also you pretend that he most be jumping from one friend to another. God he has a house, sure Dumb ass cannot reach him there but that is better than dealing with stupid gits.
So no I have read other of your stories and they were good, but this is just another stupid rapist are good, inteligent are stupid story
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