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• father way

  (#) thatgirlkarla 2010-12-12

  This story could be really interesting, but the thing is, if you don't spell check and add puncuation, it's really hard to understand. Just some constructive criticism for you.(:

• father way

  (#) sephie666 2010-12-12

  I'm sorry, this is a great story, it has a lot of action and a great plot, but could you please use spell checker and put in some puncuation? I can't understand a lot of it. . .
  other than that I love it!

  Author's response

  Hi like super sorry about that
  the thing is i figured out how to update via my phone and it dosent have spell check i will try super hard to spell things right in the furture
  thanks though :)

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