(#) i_bleed_neon 2010-12-17I loved Frankie's POV. I really was wondering what was going through his mind while all this was happening to him. I really enjoyed finding out and I think you did an excellent job describing what he was going through. Esmerelda, she was definitely a strange one but interesting all the same. Poor Mikey and Gerard, they went through so much while Frankie was sick. Loved it. Update soon. :)
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2010-12-18All of this talking pulls my teeth,
I believe in you so you'd believe in
me I cried out "god" you dared me in the dark I felt a hush go quitely from my ____ so now i hide in _______ it feels the way you told me it'd always feel. Didn't know the other lyrics XD Crazy perosn was my idea pwnd :)))
(#) ShotGunSinner 2011-01-03ESMERELDA! What a NAME ^^ I love her!
I loved the fact that Mikey and Gerard stayed with Frank stayed with him through the night, sleeping on a chair and on the floor. It just broke my heart to read that, it was so sweet.
Frankie practically choking on his own blood was heart breaking to read, it really got to me. I could imagine how Gerard and Mikey would feel watching that, how Frankie would feel going through it.
Your writing gets better and better.
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