(#) ROBERT_1958 2010-12-18Good story.
I think Ron is spying or Harry.
I hope both Hermione & Harry drop Ron as a friend.
It would have been nice if Harry had clamed any other LOrdships while at Gringotts.
It is implide in Canon Harry is the heir of Griffindor and become Lord Griffindor, as well as become Lord Slytherin, as Harry as a child removed Tom Riddle's Spirit from his body, ans defeated him again two more times at Hogwarts. As Harry is lord to two of the Hogwarts Fonders, Harry should own Hogwarts.
Author's responseAt this point in time, Ron is simply a 13 yr old kid who has a smart friend and a rich friend. He's a bit jealous of both, but they are his friends. I'm not planning on doing any Ron bashing.
As for Harry, I have enough planned for Harry that he wouldn't have time for any other lordships. lol
- It's going to be interesting to see how many other things Harry learned while he was in the Alley and how many of them become known, all too quickly, to Albus of the Many Names. I quite suspect that this, or doing something stupid, will tip Ron's hand if he is a spy and make life "interesting" for him as Harry & Hermione drop him and replace him with a good and true friend.
Author's responseHarry learned quite a bit from his Grandfather while in the Alley, but it was pretty much just the basics of how to tap into the Gem. Kinda like a two week course in how to use Microsoft Office.
As for Ron, I won't be doing any Ron-bashing. He's a 13 yr old kid, and 13 yr olds due to stupid things due to their emotions. God knows I did! LOL
- I almost needed a new pair of pants... ROTFL. Sorry. Damn good stuff and I like the way that Draco was dressed down. Keep up the good work!
Author's responseEwww ... sorry about that! Glad you liked the story, I hope to keep up the good work. Crossover will start to show up in the next chapter.
(#) Wonderbee31 2010-12-18Very good section, and enjoyed seeing Draco dressed down by Harry like he was, which is something to see, as the canon seems to show that he doggone seems to be very uncouth for what all is constantly implied by his station, though the Malfoy's remind me of what used to be calle "new money" instead of an ancient house. Will be curious what all Harry might be able to bring as far as maybe effecting things in the political arena,and afterwards when he wins. Will be fun to see if Ron can get over his pratitude early, though unfortunately, he never really seems to do so in canon imo.
Author's responseYeah, I always got the impression that the Malfoy's were 'new money' as well. Lucius 'bought' his way into the upper tiers with his marriage contract to Narcissa.
The political stuff won't happen for a bit, probably after their Christmas hols as Harry has a few things happen to him first.
- This seems like a potentially interesting story. I look forward to seeing where you go with this in the future. The Gem of Anubis seems like an interesting artifact. I look forward to seeing how you incorporate its powers into the plot.
So long as Hermione is never paired with Ron romantically, you'll have me as a reader.
Author's responseGlad you like the story so far. Hoping to get chapter 3 up soon.
At this point, the only pairing I have in mind for Harry, but it's not Hermione. I'm planning on pairing Harry off with someone in the DC Universe.
- Good part. Nice dynamic between the trio, though looks like Ron's jealousy is peeking out.
Author's responseThanks for the kind words.
The chapter I was trying to load, Chapter 3, will be up as soon as finish putting in formatting by hand that FicWad removed.
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