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Talks and fast confessions
21 reviewsThe Dursley's were sent away for child neglect when Harry was young, Dudley went to live with his aunt marge and Harry went to an orphanage and was believed dead,taken in by a muggle captain and tr...
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The Unexpected Hero
(#) Gibby 2006-05-13
Wow. You got a great story here. Moved a little fast, but it works with the whole "life in danger" thing, I guess. Well I hope you continue this story along the same lines. You know not all powerful and yet still independent. There are not a lot of good stories like that. Hope you update soon, and keep up the great writing.
-GibbyThe Unexpected Hero
(#) Shaggy37 2006-05-13
bloody brilliant, can't wait to read the next chapter and hopefully see how Harry's boss takes the newsThe Unexpected Hero
(#) harrisonpotter 2006-05-13
Great story.I like the Guns and everything like the training with Police and Military branches.I like the OC too.The Unexpected Hero
(#) dragon02 2006-05-15
Really good and interesting. One of the best stories i have read in ages. 10 out of 10.Author's response
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the rating I appreciate it. You flatter me but updates are to be sadly slower then my LOTR fic which I hope to update with 4000+ words twice a week.
Welcome to my world...or not it's up 2 you
Dark_MageThe Unexpected Hero
(#) pheonix_iceangel 2006-05-22
This is brilliantly exciting and well jsut fantastic
i really can't wait now for the next chapter
i really like the plot alot
Thank you
C u
Pheonix;)The Unexpected Hero
(#) riegert8 2006-05-28
I think this a great storty. I can't wait to read more. When will Harry boss and Liana family find out that they still alive ? And when will tell Liana family who he really am ?
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