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It's Not Your Fault
3 reviewsGerard is in the hospital...it was supposed to be Frank, but he was saved
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It's Not Your Fault
(#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-12-23
Sticks bottom lip out
This was rather upsetting.
Smiles
But I'm glad Gerard ended up alright!
You could perhaps have drawn on Frankie's guilt a little more, maybe gone into more depth and detail. But, otherwise, this was really good. I enjoyed :)
xoxox
-Frankie.Author's response
thank you :)
i might just go back and edit it a littleIt's Not Your Fault
(#) xxMloewxx 2010-12-23
I really like your storie!
And it was perfect! :)
Hope Gerard will get better soon!Author's response
thank you!
and I'm sure he will, just for Frank :)It's Not Your Fault
(#) Jetblackheartattack 2010-12-23
It's really sad but cute. The only thing I can say to improve it is that you should have made it longer. But that's a little biased on my part because I was just wanting to read more. I liked it a lot.Author's response
haha aw thanks love :)
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