- This is very good. Very intriguing. You should write a sequel. :)
Author's responseI wanted to but when I sat down and began writing it felt like I was trying way to hard. I might read what I have and have another go at it. But for now I'm happy with it the way it is.
I glad you think it's good though. :)
(#) frankisaprincess 2011-06-12That to be honest scared me alittle...don't get me wrong it was good and I liked it. Also, I know this is fanfic so you can do whatever but, I just think it might have been alittle better if the roles were switched. I say this because in reality Gerard would be more likly to kill for a living that Frankie would. I think it was weird, which is why I liked it so good job overall.
Author's responseWell, I can't remember were this came from but, I don't know. It's just I was listening to LeATHERMOUTH with Frankie's more violent side coming out. I saw this painting of a girl underwater with her hair haloing her and for some reason I thought of Gerard. And then this idea formed, so.
But thank you very much.
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