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Harry Quits
(#) OlorinBlack 2011-09-11
Okay, having read the whole story, I have one complaint.
You chose to make Harry and hermione's new last name Robertson, then changed it to Robinson then back and forth throughout the story.
Other than that, excellent storyHarry Quits
(#) Basilisk1 2012-01-17
I'm reviewing for the whole story, (at this point in time). I happened to enjoy it immensely-as for a sequel, don't bother. Unless all you plan to do is retell the same story from another's POV, such as what the DE's were doing all this time. What happened at Hogwarts.Harry Quits
(#) CrimsonRayne 2012-02-07
Its not bad, and one that could have defnitely happened because your harry and hermione were very canon. Not OOC at all. thats one point to you.
the bad parts though i suppose would be that the bad guys got off relatively easy. actually scratch that, they got off scot free. the flames of retribution died.Harry Quits
(#) LabRat 2013-04-18
the first name switch wasn't the issue it was the constant switch between robertson and robinson that confused me.Harry Quits
(#) GBTtown 2013-07-02
A really great story. Yes, you could hang a sequel on it but, it would be your choice. This is nice complete story as written.Harry Quits
(#) GBTtown 2013-11-05
My second time reading this story. As with most who mentioned it, your constantly getting the name wrong was annoying in what was really a very good little story. My question is, where did the name spring from anyway? Robertson? Wouldn't Jameson be more appropriate?
I liked the sword appearing when he needed it, just proving that he was the true inheritor. Not quite as sure about the arrow charms. Doing that wandlessly first time out of the chute is a bit of a stretch. But what the hey, it's fiction!Harry Quits
(#) hoppy159 2013-11-08
Good story. The only thing I didn't like is there wasn't any justice for Harry. His inheritance was plundered. Voldemort was defeated, so the wizards, or those responsible did not pay for how they treated him. Yes, he may have gotten away clean, and lived happily ever after, but things did not balance in the scales of justice. I just wanted to see that happen for it to feel right.Harry Quits
(#) merlinsaprentice 2014-02-28
It gave me a bit of a laugh when I read that Mrs. Abernathy was a little embarassed because she could not remember Hermione's last name, seems that Mrs. Abernathy is copying the author as it would seem said author has the same problem and is unable to remember the last name.Harry Quits
(#) Mistress_of_Potions 2014-03-20
Not a bad read but the constant switching from "Robinson" to "Robertson" was annoying and kept the story from flowing as it could have.
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