(#) Jonn_Wolfe 2014-05-07Brilliant and hilarious way moldy got offed. This was actually realistic, and that is much appreciated. Unfamiliar with how the military does things for training and such in England, but it worked for me.
Wandless and being able to summon the Sword was a great touch.
Just wish Dumbledore got bit for stealing from the Potter Vaults.
- Too bad, so sad. For those that don't think this was good enough. It makes a lot more sense then Harry always sticking around after Dumbledork and the rest of the morons at that SUPPOSED school stab him the back repeatedly. I mean think about it! Harry shows up at Hogwash smaller and thinner then any other first year. After every hospital stay where HE'S EXAMINED they still don't notice anything wrong. Dumbledork knows but refuses to do anything about the abuse. With all those reasons stated just why would Harry think returning after he past his OWLS was a good thing? And if you add in all the times the staff ignored him when he tried to tell them something, there's no reason to stay and die for those that won't even try to help themselves.
(#) Staryfury0901 2017-06-19The only question anyone should really ask about this is : Why would Harry want to stay after finding out ALL the responsible adults robbed him? Dumbledore did absolutely nothing in school or out to keep him safe so he's out. The rest of the staff at that dump were just as useless. All of them had their heads so far up Dumbledore's ass they were chewing his food for him! The less said about the ministry the better. If and I do mean if, you write a follow on to this, I think Harry and family'll have to totally clean house in the magical world. Otherwise the magical morons'll never fully stop trying to drag him back in. Whether or not they learn he did finally kill Vulturesnot. That would mean killing almost all the pure-blood families. Both light and dark. If Dumbledore should still be alive at that time, Harry'd have to kill him as well as he would never allow him to slip away again.
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