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Young and Hopeless
(#) KJLucidLove666 2011-02-01
points to screen That's me, that's me! I like this chapter, and I have a feeling that Breanna is a lot different than the boys think. :)
xoxoYoung and Hopeless
(#) vampiresdontglitter 2011-02-01
awesome start, I agree with KJlucidlove haha :D
More soon!
xoYoung and Hopeless
(#) XxBrokenSoulxX 2011-02-01
points to screen also
AHHHH THATS MEE!!!!!
=D I has a feeling Im going to surprise them.
I love this already!
More soon please!!!Young and Hopeless
(#) DeathCookie 2011-02-01
Uh-oh..Like, like KJLucidLove666 might be right, but still I have a fishy feelings. Things are def. going to start off on a rocky trail. Over all this chapter sort of gave me a feeling of connection, you know? Like I was actually there! Which is good, because even if I wasn't chose to be a charecter, your writing style is real and relatable which I love! Update soon!
xxxx
PS: You don't always have to write Montgomery; it can be a pain in the ass. So just write Monty when you're firectly quoting me, or whatever works! :)Author's response
Thank you!(: I still don't have any particular headig for this story, and I'm just honestly writing whatever pops into my head. Real and relatable, that's good.
Oh and I don't mind writing Montgomery out, I like it. I'll use nicknames more often once a few more chapters are posted.Young and Hopeless
(#) xluvxemxallx 2011-02-02
I love it I wonder how things are gonna go :) lol how Do you fail the third grade haha funny
Anyway like I said I loved it can't wait till the next one :)
Xo danni
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