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Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) longreachjones 2011-02-11
Bravo! A fitting finish to what has been a brilliant story. I can honestly say that this story has made me laugh, cry and wince in sympathy.
Some thoughts on the loose ends for the story,
Will Neville ever find out about his daughter?
If Dumbledore is denight his sacrificial lamb, what will he do to compensate? Or even worse, will he now consider Holly to be Tom Riddle Mk II?
Now that McGonagall knows about Chrysanthenum, what is to stop Dumbledore finding out about her?Author's response
(Bows)
Eventually Holly will have to confess to Neville. Odds are it will happen before his 17th birthday, despite Holly's intentions.
Dumbledore will have to recover from losing his crutches (Elder wand and Pensieve), which is poorly-timed for the reformation of the Order. Sometimes Holly screws up.
Holly isn't concerned with people finding out about her baby anymore- it will provide a reasonable explanation for how she spends her time away from the conflict. If Dumbledore pulls some prophecy out of his arse... Holly will respond, but Chrysalis stays protected at the Nautilus and guarded by Winky.
Besides, Albus may have been wrong about Holly losing heroic lustre since she didn't actually abort the baby, but she had already crossed that line with Sim-Holly.
See you next time for 'The Spiral Path', coming soon to a fanfiction website near you.Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) Staros 2011-06-17
This has been one of the longest, most detailed, and richly altered stories I have yet to read. While some go as far as a single book, maybe two, WH has outdone everyone so far by not only sticking to the original story's heart, but by running the majority of the series without ruining the soul of the series. Many of the somewhat confusing points and plot holes of the original books are firmly addressed and neatly closed up by Holly in ways Harry would never have been able to do.
Keep it up! Do other book series! Make the world of fiction have some true logical chaos!
Oh, and maybe consider writing professionally. You are definitely good enough.Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) kuro001 2016-11-10
damn good mate, had me on the edge of my seat pouring over this till the end.
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