- A most interesting chapter that looks to set in place things that'll show up later. I don't know if "Emperor" would be the correct term, but I do remember there was a title that a Roman commander of a Legion could only take if his men acclaimed him of it. You might want to research that and use it.
(#) Wonderbee31 2011-02-25Interesting to see more of this, and looks like Harry is definitely making his way here, just gonna be curious about that Emperor part, especially if his army wins, because what's a fighting army supposed to do then?
Author's responseWhat's it is designed to, fulfill Harry's Goal. But instead into the Galactic core, they'll be aiming into the unknown regions. Harry needs to find earth again, and its way easier with an army of himself instead of just him.
- This is a brilliant story. Most HP/SW crossovers have him becoming a jedi right off the bat. I really like the idea of having him be a Clone commander and the fact that you are hinting that a few of his clones want to jump him is great. I like the Jealousy from Amriah. it is highly amusing and i cant wait to see how that all plays out. Will he be returning to the HP universe? If so i cant wait to see the reactions of everyone there. Excellent work, i cant wait for an update.
- Should be fun when Harry show back up in earth system with a huge army of fanatically loyal troops and the super advanced weapons compared to the earth. It should be nearly imposable for any of his clone to truly betray him but they will have there own interpenetration of how to best serving him. Harry will take the best of the Jedi and Sith teachings and fuse them together. Rejecting the Jedi complete denial of emotions but not the Sith letting emotions free reign he will find himself more adaptable then both in war.
What will Dumbledore think a bought this army that has no reason to see him as anything as a bothersome old man. Even if Tom managed to take over the entire earth without destroying both the population and infrastructure could still not win against what Harry is bring along with him.
Think of this an army made up of individuals that are literally brothers and sisters armed with cutting edge weapons. Add for fun they have full force powers to use in battle. The question is what will the world governments do with this siting in orbit and they have no ability to really put up more then a token fight if Harry decides he wants the entire world.
One thing is I believe is that the Jedi where rendering themselves extinct by taking force users out of population as babies and not letting them breed any new generations. If some of the subtext in the movies is true the number of Jedi had been falling for years even before the clone wars. The clone wars just scattered them making them more vulnerable to over whelming attack. So what if it took several hundred droids or several dozen clones to kill a Jedi in the end it was a cheap way of killing one. Attrition warfare never favors groups like the Jedi of the old republic.
- An awesome story. Harry in charge of his own clone army is really cool and the entire story is well written, though the formatting in the interlude is a bit off.
Is Harry going to go back to the wizarding world? It has been quite a long time since he vanished.
Author's responseTrue, I have several snippet chapters in mind to give you guys a glimpse of what's happening on Earth while Harry's gone. What's interesting about space in that time in space does not equal to the time on Earth. So it allows Harry to grow and mature without the cost of coming back to a Earth that has been conquered by Voldemort decades ago.
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