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• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) bloodless_souls 2011-04-01

  yahhah!! safety at last!!!!! update soon :D

  Author's response

  haha yes :D
  hehe i'm glad you like it
  thanks for reviewing and yes more soon
  xx coz

• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) adrenaline_bomb 2011-04-01

  yay!They're safe, finally!!! Update soon!

  Author's response

  HEHE yes lol together safe
  and yes i will have more done soon
  thanks for reading and reviewing :)
  xx coz

• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) annabel-lee 2011-04-02

  Yay! That reminds me of the song in the wizard of oz. "Ding dong the wicked witch is dead!" just change it to wicked dad and we're all set! Its so sad that it's coming to an end.

  Author's response

  haha lol yeah very true haha XD
  thanks so mucg for reading and reviewing :D it really does mean a lot
  and lol i beg to differ i'm glad its coming to an end i can then concentrate on 'happiness or misery?' heh i dont really loike this story but i'm glad you do so thanks :)
  the last chap will be up next week
  xx coz

• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) CosmicZombie 2011-04-02

  awww, that was one of the sweetest chapter's i've read! i'm not usually glad when characters die, but steve was an exception- he definitely deserved what he got- i mean, seriously, who could hurt adorable little Frankie?! so glad Gerard and Frankie are safe- the cliffhanger on the chapter before got me worried...lol xD i loved the way you made this chapter emotional (as it obviously needed to be haha!) but not too overwhemingly so- the extent and the way you portrayed the sadness and the relief and everything was perfect :) good stuff! can't waaaaaaaait to read the last chapter, even though i'm really sad it has to end :( this story is defo going in my favourites xD loved the last paragraph- I was just standing by the swings, admiring Gerard from a far. Everything just seemed so perfect now and I knew being with Gerard was one of the best things that’s ever happened to me. I feel like there’s a whole weight that has finally lifted off my shoulders, and I am finally three and this is defiantly where I want to be for sure.
  

  Author's response

  hehe thanks :D i'm really glad you think so
  hehe lol defo haha he deserved it lol and OMG this is defo the right length for your reviews haha i was getting worried for a sec XD lol
  and thank you i have done better but its really nice to hear what you think and support me :) haha thanks i will try and make it the best that i can hehe aww thats really great thanks lol it really does mean a lot that you take your time to R&R and read and then leave me massive reviews hehe i really love them they always make me smile :D
  more next week
  xx coz

• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) UndergroundCinnamon 2011-06-08

  I just finished re-reading this story; i read it a while back (when i still didn't have an account XD), and when i found it again i decided to re-read it (i had completly forgotten what it was about-a good memory is not something I have XD) and remembered why i loved it so much. It's one of the sweetest stories ever!!
  xx
  a

  Author's response

  awww really :o you actually read this and then re-read it lol your insane lol this is my first and i dont really like it XD tho i am really happy to hear great comments like your own :)
  
  originally i was going to carry on with this but i reallly dont want to drag it on i feel its getting boring so i will just leave here i think :)
  i have a much better stroy called 'happiness or misery?' and i think thats better written as more poeple like that so feel free to check that out if you love this you must like that lol and it would be nice if you could check outt my other stuff >.<
  i'm being gready but yeah i do that. hehe
  Anyway thank you sooo much itts reallly nice that you read this again :D
  chazom
  xx
  p.s. my memory is soooo bad too XD

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