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Forever Alone
2 reviewsI wrote this yesterday because I’m going through a lot. I have been told that we are moving to Australia and we could be leaving before this school year ends. I really don’t want to go but here...
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Forever Alone
(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-04-14
Wow... You put feelings of mine into words. I mean... Wow. Deep poetry, (none of that light, pixie shit) like this, is just evoking, and letitng you into the world that most people assume doesn't exist with anybody. But here you are, pounding out your words into a work of art, angsty and dramatic and real. Thank you.
Good luck in Australia, and stay strong.Author's response
Thank you sooo much! I don't normally write poetry but I think I will got back into it. I cry myself to sleep most nights knowing that I dont want to move and lose everything I have here even though I have at most 2 friends. I will have to stay strong and keep writing so thank you for encouraging me!
Rhianna xx :o)Forever Alone
(#) kimpo 2011-04-15
YAY im one of those friends. ps thats deep man/womanAuthor's response
I no you are, mes amigo. I only have one friend other than you. I am going to dedicate part of my story to you cause you have been by my side since I was four. Hehe. You know I'm a woman you dumb ass. Hehe. XD XD XD!
Rhianna xx :o)
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