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• Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic

  (#) Darkmark66 2011-04-14

  This was great I loved what Gabrielle said and did to keep the Dursley's in line.
  
  I will say I did not like Harry using the words bloody brilliant its to crude and too much like Ron I think Harry would speak better or he should.
  
  I am pleased thing are going well between Harry and Gabrielle the bonding with the owl was a good detail to have Harry seems to get on well with birds so might explain some of why he trusts Gabby or was able to bond with her so easily.
  
  I am glad Harry has Remus to count on a bit but I think his talking to Albus will be pointless as the old man was happy to put Harry at risk in the tournament so it would not be a surprise if he planned to damage Harry's mind to force the Dark Lord into the open and break Harry's resolve so he would be easier to control and accept or seek death.
  
  If the Headmaster had concerns about Remus I bet the old man would see him kill by Severus for the greater good.
  
  I would really enjoy it if Snape was punished for what he has done to Harry.
  
  I liked the information on Gabrielle's parents I look forward to the next chapter.

• Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic

  (#) mazinga69 2011-04-14

  I am really enjoying this story. It is making me impatient to read the next chapters. Don't rush, though, as you are currently putting out quality work. Keep it coming.

• Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic

  (#) timm1131 2011-04-14

  Good stuff!! I like your style of writing as well as the story line itself. I hope you are enjoying writing this as much as I am reading it.Looking forward to the next chapter, and thanks for sharing.

• Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic

  (#) Robin42069 2011-04-14

  this story is going great so far i like also that you didn't have harry and gabby just jump in bed becuz of the bond.its refreshing that you take it slower than alot of other authors.
  
  thank you for sharing you work
  

• Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic

  (#) Theo 2011-04-14

  I see four outcomes for the conversation:
  
  1. Albus wanted the connection stronger;
  a. oblivate Remus of the details.
  b. Remus goes on a suicidal mission.
  
  2. Albus thought Snape would truly help and not just assault Harry.
  
  3. Snape is on Riddle's side in the story.

• Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic

  (#) cfp33pfc 2011-04-15

  Thanks for the chapter, I really enjoyed it. I like Remus a lot as well and hated when he and Tonks were killed off. I also like how you used Gabi's natural powers on the Dursley's, eliminating any of the "underage magic" issues.

• Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic

  (#) Wolfric 2011-04-16

  Fine chapter. I'm sure it will be interesting when Hermione shows up. Thanks for writing. W.

• Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic

  (#) tbalm 2011-04-17

  So far the story is going very good! In my opinion the Dursleys were shut up a little easy. But the rest is pretty well wrote. Intrested in how you are going to portray Hermione. Good luck on the next chapter and keep up the good writing!

• Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic

  (#) ficbob 2011-04-17

  Good read
  I hope that the owner of the hawk gets an ass kicking.
  Thanks

• Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic

  (#) badboy1cdx 2011-04-18

  I'm enjoying the story!
  You just know Vernon and Dudley won't be cowed so easily, and I would love to see what would happen if they tried something with Gabi...
  Anyway, keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!

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