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In Which Harry starts learning his magic, and the Dursleys meet an angry Veela
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Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic
(#) ILikeToRead 2011-04-19
Great story so far and good to see Harry getting some much needed help. Thanks for sharing!Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic
(#) TheResident 2011-04-21
Quite enjoyable so far. I try not to nitpick and just enjoy the story. I can definitely see HPGD as a viable pairing. It is 1000 times better than HPGW. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to seeing the result of Remus talking the Dumbledork in regards Snape and Harry's Mail. Eagerly awaiting the next and all following chapters.Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic
(#) darkfriend 2011-04-22
Once again, yet another excellently written chapter. I'm also glad to see continuity in the style of writing and some regularity in the posting schedule so far. Of course, I'd rather wait a few days to see something that's ready than a rushed chapter.
Seems to me the Dursley's got off very light, and I don't think Vernon in particular will take the warning to heart. He seems to be the kind that will require pain for any true learning. I'm just curious of how long it will take him to work himself back up to challenging the presence of a "freak and harlot" in his house.
It's going to to be interesting seeing where Remus goes in this fic. He's obviously unhappy with how Harry's situation has been handled by the order, and he's even willing to help Harry keep the bond's presence secret for a wile. But Remus does owe a tremendous amount to Dumbledore, so I wonder how he'll respond if his questions regarding Harry's situation do not produce substantive answers. If he has to choose sides in Harry v Dumbledore, which way will he fall?
Looking forward to some more focus on Harry's Power and Bond with Gabby in the next chapter. How much will they be able to work on magic practice without tipping off the Ministry?
Please keep up the great job! Can't wait for Hermione and Gabby in the same room. Should be quite interesting until they both understand what's going on...Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic
(#) kihakukage 2011-05-01
really cool i really cant wait 4 the next chapterHarry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic
(#) MrPowell 2011-05-16
Very well done first few chapters.
Honestly I'm tired of seeing Evil/Controlling Dumbledore fics, so I hope that's not the direction you intend to take this one... Not sure who else could own the hawk, aside from possibly the ministry, but it would be nice if it wasn't Dumbledore.
It was good to see Remus and Harry interact, even though they seemed a little too close for a meeting like this.
I like your Gabby so far, but would like to see more of what makes her tick.
I'm looking forward to the meeting of the femmes. I actually kinda hope it won't go perfectly well, as conflict is what drives any good story. I also hope that if you do go that route, that they grow close rather quickly, as I prefer to see my heroes as a united front.
Here's hoping you decide to update fairly soonHarry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic
(#) acepung 2011-05-18
Nice Story!
Already looking forward for the next chapter, i enjoyed how you had gabby handle the dursley's, keep up the good work!!!!Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2011-07-17
Very good chapter. Good story so far.
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(#) gwydionc 2011-09-15
This is a good story, so far. I've read some of the reviews, and I agree with some that said that Vernon was too easily cowed... but then again, maybe not... I would figure on seeing him getting his back bone back at least once or twice more...
Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic
(#) Uticadanno 2012-07-27
Good story so far. I hope you can find the time to continue it. There are so few good Harry/Gabrielle stories out there that it's always good to see another one.
Good luck with school!Harry Potter And The Secrets Of Magic
(#) David3560 2012-09-20
Wonders if you are going to keep this story going on not.
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