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The Kids From Yesterday
(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-04-15
:O
No fucking way.
I saw you on LiveJournal! And I mean, I was hooked! Shine I haven't read yet, but you're on FicWad! This is awesome!
Okay, since this is a review, aw, I loved the smut. I mean, you focused on the feelings of Mia, it wasn't just some readable porn for your mind to imagine. How she knew she was playing Frank though I loved also. 'I knew what I was doing, I wasn't drunk.' was my favorite line in this chapter. For Mia to be smart enough to act drunk, then get him upstairs while acting like a smart drunk was simply amazing.
Sorry for the long review. Update soon!Author's response
Thank you! I hope you like Shine! And yeah I just joined FicWad, I don't even know how to use it yet or anything, haha.
That's what I was going for! I mean don't get my wrong I love a good smut now and then but for this story I think it needed some feeling. And Mia is sneaky isn't she, haha.
Never apologize for the length, I want to heard opinions good or bad!The Kids From Yesterday
(#) Wilt 2011-04-15
Wow. This is amazing. I especially like how you made the "not labeling" part in one of your other chapters because I hate labeling. Please write more. I wanna see what happens to Gerard.Author's response
Thank you! I hate labeling, too. It doesn't matter what you wear as long as you love the music. :D Thanks for reading!The Kids From Yesterday
(#) Wilt 2011-04-15
Wow. This is amazing. I especially like how you made the "not labeling" part in one of your other chapters because I hate labeling. Please write more. I wanna see what happens to Gerard.The Kids From Yesterday
(#) sineadlovesmcr 2011-04-16
Oh.My.Gee!THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!I badly Want to know whay happens to Gee !!! Update soon :)Author's response
Thank you! You'll find out soon. And it's just the beginning! :D
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