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• Saviour of the Broken

  (#) andreajp 2011-05-07

  While I was reading this I was singing in my head ready to fall by rise against lol. I haven't a clue how to end this, I think I'm still in shock of Gerard's dad beating up Frank! Whatever you decide to do I'm sure it will be good.

  Author's response

  Haha, yeah. I was listening to it while trying to think up a title and it just seemed to fit haha(: xx Thanks!

• Saviour of the Broken

  (#) Kendally11 2011-05-07

  Im not sure how you should end it, it's up to you, but I freaking love this story! I can't wait for the next update! :)

  Author's response

  Haha yeah, me neither! Thank you very muchly(: xx

• Saviour of the Broken

  (#) fueledbyPanic 2011-05-07

  AHHHHH you can't do this to me I'm dying! jk but you better update soon!

  Author's response

  I will:D x

• Saviour of the Broken

  (#) rainbow_apocalypse 2011-05-08

  Omg gee should save him :) lol it awesome poor Frankie whatever you think x

  Author's response

  Hah, wait and see ;3
  Thanks xx

• Saviour of the Broken

  (#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-05-08

  I'm not sure how you should end it, it's your story but i love love LOVE your story. Update soon!!!!!!!!!

  Author's response

  Haha, same ;3 Thanks! I will xx

• Saviour of the Broken

  (#) katieboo1993 2011-05-08

  This has a really good plot and i love it! Please update soon i want to see how it turns out! :)

  Author's response

  Thank you! I will (: x

• Saviour of the Broken

  (#) Lizzeh 2011-05-08

  wow really great chapter, was not expecting that o.O i'm not sure how you should end it, Longer maybe? fit in more of your amazing writing :D
  
  update sooon!!! xxx

  Author's response

  Aw(: Thanks so much!

• Saviour of the Broken

  (#) ILove_FrankIero 2011-05-08

  Ahh you have to update soon the longer the story the better ;) i know this might sound weird but i see a therapist and i was told to write every thing down that i have to live for and this is one me them. I know it's stupid but i Love it so much that i might print the story out so i can read it time and time again xxx update soon please your story is amazeing xxxxxxxxxxxxx

  Author's response

  Really!? You make me feel so special! :D, I'm touched.
  It's not stupid! If you did that it would make me feel like I'm talented! Haha, You make me love writing even more than I did before! Thank you
  xx

• Saviour of the Broken

  (#) SpencerG 2011-05-08

  Oh my fucking god! Noooo! Sweet mother of Tomo don't let Frank die or anything like that please! I want to cry so bad right now. I'm on the edge of my seat wIting for your next update. I mean Gerard and Mikey's father is taking pleasure in beating the life out of Frank like him he did to Gerard not so long ago. Why didn't Frank start running after he turned around? He knew they were following him. I just hope it makes it alive, I don't really cre if he is well just alive.
  
  Random idea I got just now for your next chapter: Gerard hears everything over the phone or something like that but is too shock to go save Frank. He instead calls the police and gives them the address to the pub his father usually goes to. Frank gets rescued by the cops with just a weak grasp on his life. Police call an ambulance an it takes Frank to the hospital. When Ways go visit Frank Gerard says "Frank I'm so sorry I should have gone to save you myself" (or something like that) and Frank says "Its alright. You didnt know." Then Gerard looks at Frank with tears in his eyes and replies " Yes I did. I heard the whole thing over the phone. I couldn't do anything but just listen to every punch and kick. When everything got quiet and ran to took Mikey's phone to call the police. I'm so so sorry."

  Author's response

  Heya, thanks for the suggestion. Sorry, I'd already posted the next chapter before I had read this. You've got some really good ideas though! Thanks so much! xx

• Saviour of the Broken

  (#) SpencerG 2011-05-08

  Sweet mother of Tomo I wrote a lot. Sorry.

  Author's response

  Haha, it's fine! The more the better! ;3

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