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Be My Detonator
21 reviewsFRERARD! It's the summer holidays- Gerard is looking forward to six weeks of sun and laziness. But when he meets his stepsister's new boyfriend, things become a little more interesting...CHAPTER 1 ...
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Be My Detonator
(#) xxHeavenxHelpxUsxx 2012-02-15
You are an amazing writer! Update soon plzzzz!!! I cant wait to c wat happens next and i might have to send some ducks in purple rainboots after u if u dont!!!Be My Detonator
(#) deadlysquirt 2012-02-16
I LOVE this story, can't wait for it to be updated, I love your writing you have such amazing talent xDBe My Detonator
(#) suicidechild666 2012-02-25
Ohmymoosepoopingsexuallyabusedcatsandunicornfuckers, I have never loved rambling as much as I have reading your work. What with Gerard not being able to speak english when Frank's around or the fact that Mikey comes off as a sadistic unicorn-f-cking straightener-obsessed dick (love it though)! This story is epic! I thank you so much for taking your time to put up the chapters, I know it must not always be easy. I look forward to future knee-melting smiles, cat snogging, and flexible mascara wands. lol :DBe My Detonator
(#) Sleeping7Beast 2012-03-13
OMG! I read this whole thing last night and it's so amazing! I laughed through the whole thing! You are a fantastic writer! Very good job! I can't wait until you update, you ended at a very evil place!
Gerard is my favorite. He's such a hopeless mess, lol. When he said he wanted to be reincarnated into a slug i wanted to die XD XD XD And when he said he hoped Frank would be a slug too so they could have slug babies and eat each others slime was awesome Bahahahahaha XD (funniest part) He's such a freak and it's great! And he's always falling and speaking jiberish, IT'S AN AWESOME GEE!
I like Frank too! He's so cool and collect, i'd like to see what he's actually thinking about when he's watching Gerard trip over everything (lol, another favorite thing). The nose fetish thing is SOO cute! -
I'm not going to lie, their first kiss was SOOO hot! OMG! O_O Like sixteen times better then any other sexy time i've ever read, and it was just a kiss??? OMG! My ovaries were screaming OH DEAR LORD I'M GOING TO KEEL OVER AND BURN IN HELL FOR ENJOYING THIS, THIS MUCH!!!! OMG XD fmfsfltnogafajk !!!! XD .... basically.
Then there was the Frank giving Gee a bj...in Jamie's room...on her bed....O_O...that was AWESOME! I give you a thousand awesome points for that! And because it was so freaking HOT! OMG!!! swoons
Ray and Mikey are awesome! Their so evil! I love when Mikey tricks Gerard! It's so funny and i can't help but think 'Poor baby is so pathetic' when Gerard get's all flustered about it!! And Ray's cat snogging ways are so funny! They are PERFECT!
Lol, when Gerard screamed at the mail-man...HAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!!! XD
Or when he was trying to hide in Ray's fro!
Poor baby -_-
Anyways, this is SOOO great! hugs You are awesome!
Please upload soon! I NEED more! I can usually wait, but right now i can't! PLEASE WITH FUCKING CHERRIES ON TOP!
XOXO
-SBBe My Detonator
(#) Artemis_Killjoy_Pond 2012-04-05
You've converted me!! I never usually like this chatty writing style but the way you've written it from Gerard's crazy mind's point of view is amazing!! One of my favourite Frerard stories :DAuthor's response
YAY! I'm so glad you like it :D Thanks for reviewing!Be My Detonator
(#) bvbrocks 2012-08-30
Hey there :3 I was wondering what you would think of me making this into a pod!fic. I've been wanting to do one for a chaptered fic, and I was thinking of doing it chapter by chapter as you re-write this. I wanted to check with you first though, to see if you liked the idea :3Be My Detonator
(#) bvbrocks 2012-09-10
Just FYI, I've changed my email. It is now batterydiamond45@gmail.com so email the next chapter to there.Be My Detonator
(#) Savagella666 2012-10-04
This is actually your best story yet. I laughed sooooo much I could not stop laughing.:LAuthor's response
Thank you so much :'DBe My Detonator
(#) FightingForever 2013-02-14
Hey, this story is seriously amazing. So many times, without sounding like a total creeper, instead of reaching for my blade when I've been down I have read this story instead and it has instantly cheered me up. You are so incredibly talented. Never ever stop writing...EVER!!
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