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I don`t love you like I did yesterday
6 reviewsLindsey thinks Gerard is cheating and kicks him out. He goes to Mikey`s and admits he doesn`t love her and that he is actually in love with Frank. 1st story.
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I don`t love you like I did yesterday
(#) urafreaklikeme 2011-05-07
i love it!
Another chapter please?
FRERARD! FRERARD! FRERARD!
:DI don`t love you like I did yesterday
(#) Mcrfan789 2011-05-07
I love this story so far. I wanna read more.I don`t love you like I did yesterday
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-05-08
Update again soon, this is really good!! i must read moreI don`t love you like I did yesterday
(#) adrenaline_bomb 2011-05-08
I love this, it's really good so far, well done! Update soon please??I don`t love you like I did yesterday
(#) XxxFallenAngelXxxx 2011-05-08
Updated! I don`t really like new chapter, might redo it later. thank you all so much for reading, i wrote this at 1 am(ish) so I am really suprised anyone likes it and that it is readable.I don`t love you like I did yesterday
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-05-15
This surprised me by being decent. But there are a few things you need to brush up on.
Some "I"s need capitalising. There are some which are lowercase and that pisses me off no end. Also there are some words in the genetive case which don't have an apostrophe, for example, "brothers" should be "brother's" and "Gees" should be "Gee's" etc. There are a few words which need a space before them as well.
The writing, especially description is actually pretty good. Well done. I'm interested to see where this plotline goes, could be another cliché but I'll read on before I pass judgement. Just look over the mistakes I pointed out but overall, really good work.Author's response
Thank you for pointing all of my mistakes out for me.
Grammar isn`t really my strong point and I wrote everything on here when I was either very tired, or at the early hours of the morning. (I suffer from Insomnia or something simmilar.)
I am happy that it suprised you, personally I think that this story, along with everything else I write, is rather rubbish.
Thanks again.
Xoxo Dakota
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