Alternate Order of the Phoenix. Harry is, quite naturally, a little ticked off at his friends and the Headmaster. Muggle science has developed a way to splice animal DNA into humans. Fawkes has ...
(#) Vayne 2006-05-26
I just finished reading this fic on the Yahoo group it's been posted on, and it's looking great. A lot of humour, mixed in with a blend of plot from OotP, HBP and original stuff that keeps the pace going fast. There's a lot about this story to praise; the way you've managed to change Harry without making him overly powerful, for example, and how you've kept the cast in character while making the story a lot funnier than normal. Definitely some great work, and I can't wait to read more.
Wonderful work glad you are post here as well as cearazkaban.
Very interesting start, quirky and funny - Shawn
This story is funny, gives ideas for others fics and give a bit less seriousness to a stressed out plot
This story is so good I couldn't rate it any higher, sadly. The concept is amazing, and I wish there were more stories that did something like this instead of "surprise, somewhere in your bloodline is "x creature"!!"
LoL... what a great and intrestting start to the story, so Harry store a feather from Fawkes. I don't think Fawkes is happy with Harry at the moment.
I saw an ad at Muvico for "beast augmentation" (they forgot the "r" xD) and I thought of this story. Do you plan on continuing it at all, or is it dead? :(
What a great start to the story, the fool Harry took a feather from Fawkes... he should just ask then just taking one.
This is really good. Wish you'd carry on though, please?
While reading this chapter I had this thought, " What if instead of Fawkes feather Harry had produced a Dragon scale or even a vial of blood for splicing "? I've already read the entire story so already know how badly the splicing machine reacts to the feather. So how could it get any worse for a Dragon? Just a crazy thought. The stoey's quite enjoyable to read by the way.
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