Alternate Order of the Phoenix. Harry is, quite naturally, a little ticked off at his friends and the Headmaster. Muggle science has developed a way to splice animal DNA into humans. Fawkes has ...
(#) Vayne 2006-05-26
I just finished reading this fic on the Yahoo group it's been posted on, and it's looking great. A lot of humour, mixed in with a blend of plot from OotP, HBP and original stuff that keeps the pace going fast. There's a lot about this story to praise; the way you've managed to change Harry without making him overly powerful, for example, and how you've kept the cast in character while making the story a lot funnier than normal. Definitely some great work, and I can't wait to read more.
Wonderful work glad you are post here as well as cearazkaban.
Very interesting start, quirky and funny - Shawn
This story is funny, gives ideas for others fics and give a bit less seriousness to a stressed out plot
This story is so good I couldn't rate it any higher, sadly. The concept is amazing, and I wish there were more stories that did something like this instead of "surprise, somewhere in your bloodline is "x creature"!!"
LoL... what a great and intrestting start to the story, so Harry store a feather from Fawkes. I don't think Fawkes is happy with Harry at the moment.
I saw an ad at Muvico for "beast augmentation" (they forgot the "r" xD) and I thought of this story. Do you plan on continuing it at all, or is it dead? :(
What a great start to the story, the fool Harry took a feather from Fawkes... he should just ask then just taking one.
This is really good. Wish you'd carry on though, please?
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