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Ron Gets Wrecked (By Hagrid)
(#) lilgenious 2011-04-27
Oksy so I read all your stories and found that they are all classified as trainwrecked. However being the nice person I am I am going to leave a review for this story and maybe offer some useful advice.
This story that I read didn't really make sense, and I am sad to say that none of the other stories do as well. In a onesot I have to admit that they are very rushed and that is why I end up having multi chapters:( I fail at oneshots miserably.
Don't take this as flamming please: But I do think that in order to get more reviews to your stories is to actually create one that makes sense. One that doesn't have to sound so horrible (I am sorry!), but maybe I should explain myself more. Because this story had a jumble of ideas it made it sound horrible and it didn't really make any sense.
Also have you tried fanfiction.net? They have a Harry Potter fandom and if you posted your stories there then there would be a lot of authors willing to help you out. (I read your profile and found out that you were on another fanfiction site so I decided to ask that).
Before you post a story, I find that it helps to read over the story and edit any mistakes and see if it makes sense. I also find that feedback on the story really helps as well and it is a shame that not one of your stories ever got any reviews on it to give you the helpful advice that you need.Author's response
dear lilgenious,
first of all its spelled genius,
and unless your username is some name ive never heard spelled genious i think it's safe to assume you can't spell your way out of a paper bag.
your review was not in any way constructive and you completely failed to see the point of our story, everything was extremely vague and you didn't allude to anything in the story that could help us improve. and i know that our story was well written and grammatically correct so the only reason you wouldn't be able to understand it is 1. your an illiterate idiot or 2. English is not your first language. our story was a satire on the ridiculous fanfiction that so many teenage girls write that are horribly written and the only reason they exist is to release their pent up horny frustrations. our story was meant to be comedic and entertaining and we are insulted that you would scrutinize it so badly, then again you have to take things that idiots say with a grain of salt.Ron Gets Wrecked (By Hagrid)
(#) storytellerandlover 2011-05-21
On behalf of lilgenious: This author is not stupid and can spell themself out of a paper bag. lilgenious is a pen name and is original, I don't think that this author much cares about the spelling of a pen name. By the way that is a common spelling mistake by the French. The French and I don't mean this to be rude but a lot of non English people, especially from France do not spell that word correctly. They spell it through word of mouth or the way it is spelled in French. However I think that lilgenious is exhibiting expression and personality.
Besides all this the review this person left had a lot of constructive and a lot of praises. Things like "It is a shame that not one of your stories ever got any reviews on it." That means that despite the things this person said that they still enjoyed the story and were giving you some advice. Advice that you turned on lilgenious by calling this person stupid and just for a pen name! Plus English is NOT this person's first language and you should be made aware of this... even though her stories are written in English and they are well written for that matter she still has difficulties in the English language and I should know that because I know her personally and help her out whenever I can. However seeing as she moved back to her country I can't really help her now can I?
Now onto the story: I agree with lilgenious on this one, it was a bit confusing. However I enjoy your creativity and how well thought out the story was. It sounded a bit rushed to me as well where you sped up the ending and all but other than that there is nothing wrong with it:) Is there going to be any more? Maybe you should write more...
Now onto the author that you called illiterate... http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1795081/lilgenious
Seriously check her stories out, even though she only has written one Harry Potter story she has written others in different fandoms. Now when you read her stories tell me if you think they are illiterate.
Keep writing though:) I look forward to more.Author's response
....we wrote more.
the only problem we had was when she said it was horrible and that we "needed" help because we love our story and wouldn't change a thing. we get our sick kicks from reading it every time and it makes us laugh which is what the story was intended for
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