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Chapter One: The Shininess of Sun
31 reviewsIce cream promises, guitar-induced dribbling, and menstruating cherry tomatoes. [*RE-WRITTEN* CHAPTER ONE...PLEASE READ AND REVIEW, GUYS? :D]
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"Be My Detonator."
(#) perfectzombie 2011-05-09
OMG LOLOL UPDATE SOON GFANGFJGNFDGADFAJD I LOVE IT ALREADYAuthor's response
aww, thanks, glad you like it! :D will do :)
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) serialegocrusher 2011-05-09
This. Is. Pure. Awesomeness. WHEEEE. I want moar. GIMMEEEE.
I'll give you double choc chip cookies covered in toffee and cinnamon ice-cream if you do? :3Author's response
haha thank you :D hmmm, with an offer of double choc chip cookies covered with toffee and cinnamon ice cream i really don't think i can refuse to update this :P the next chapter should be up at the weekend :) thanks for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) becksmizundastood 2011-05-09
This story is really funny, i would love to read more!!!!Author's response
thank you :) I should be able to update in a couple of days! :D
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) annabel-lee 2011-05-10
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! It's great! Very funny and light-hearted. :)Author's response
haha, thanks, glad you like it :)
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) Broken_Feathers 2011-05-10
you need to update i luv ALL of your stories :DAuthor's response
awww, thanks :) I should update by the weekend xD
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) xxMetalxFreak69 2011-05-10
Haha nice! And I thought I had embarrased Gee enough with the locker incident and the whole shouting out random swear words 24/7. Freaking awesome hunni keep it up. ;)Author's response
aww, thanks :D emabaressed Gee is always so cute...and funny haha xD I really love your story btw- i hope you'll update soon xD thanks for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) sineadlovesmcr 2011-05-16
Oooooh Update soooon and when you do I will give you skittles and a can of coke :D xx"Be My Detonator."
(#) TheBambooMuncher 2011-05-19
SIFVSIFVSDIFJFVSRGIWRMGKNF USHRKFNDIBEIRDNFBEIF GAH!!!!!! MORE. NOW!!!!!!! It's so freakin' cute ^^ and I have a craving for plectrums!!!! Having craving for actual food is soooooo mainstream ;) update soon!
-End Transmission-Author's response
awww, thank you! so glad you like it :D
hahaha, plectrums are sooo much more interesting than normal food :P i'll update at the weekend :)
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) MeganMastermind 2011-05-23
Ice cream? Tortie-shell kittens? Hilarity from our favourite band? All things that I either want, have, or love. Please keep writing forever, for all that is good in the world. :D
Also, intense description, I LOVE IT."Be My Detonator."
(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-05-31
OMG your work never seems to disopoint me, just gets more better and better. I odn't know how you do it. I actually have never read any authors work as good as yours, not even pubblished books. Though i dont
read many, your still the bets :)
i wish i wasnt so slow to rate this, it was amazingly written, funny and packed of amusemnt :)
your writing is really the best and i cannot wait to write with you, ist going to be soo great.
this is no doubt going into my faves.
“Yeah, I can call you squirt if I wan- I’m at least a foot taller than you.” Ray points out.
“Which is made up of your hair!” I quip.
this made me Lmao HEHE
great work and i am going to read more now.
chazom
xx
p.s. your description of frank was fucking hottt :p
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