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Chapter One: The Shininess of Sun
31 reviewsIce cream promises, guitar-induced dribbling, and menstruating cherry tomatoes. [*RE-WRITTEN* CHAPTER ONE...PLEASE READ AND REVIEW, GUYS? :D]
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"Be My Detonator."
(#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2011-06-23
ok so basically, this is epic; all the description and stuff. amazing. you are awesome and also on my favourites(:"Be My Detonator."
(#) Thank_MCR 2011-08-02
I love it. Its really cute and made me squeee and laugh at the end. My dog is looking at me like I'm a maniac..."Be My Detonator."
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-09-27
WHY haven't I read this before? Fucken awesome from the first chapter!! Bob is so cool.
SF xx"Be My Detonator."
(#) SummerShock 2012-02-14
Oh my dear, that was amazing :) I am so glad I have finally found a talented writer :)"Be My Detonator."
(#) JTlovesgee_frankie 2012-04-02
omg i love this :D my friend chrissy is just like gerard in this story today she managed to fall over nothing it was soo funny by the way you should write another story like this"Be My Detonator."
(#) KilljoyKid 2012-05-26
O_O We get three months of Summer holidays... Poor Gee only gets six? P.s, I must admit I haven't read ANY of this fic yet, I just wanted to say SIX WEEKS? hehe I will read it though and give you a proper review!"Be My Detonator."
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-07-26
It's so weird seeing all the old usernames from when this started so long ago. I like it a lot, like a lot a lot oh Gee and Frank"Be My Detonator."
(#) Echelonfrommars 2012-07-27
Wow,when I started reading this story a few months ago I absolutely loved it. (even if Gerard seemed brain-dead sometimes ;p) But now it's just fucking awesome.:D Really ^^
Keep up the good work ;)"Be My Detonator."
(#) MCR_ROCK_RHCP 2012-07-28
Even better. hmmm. Hmmmmmmmm.
HOW THE FUCK IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?!?!?!?
Steph x_•Author's response
Ahaaaha, thank you xD"Be My Detonator."
(#) ChasingPavementsxoxo 2012-07-29
I liked the rewritten version, but I'm not sure if I liked this or the first version better. This version is really good though c:
xxIzzyAuthor's response
Thanks (: Really? The first version of chapter one was really shitty in my opinion- bad grammar, layout and just sloppily written :L Thanks for reviewing!
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