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Balance of Three: Three Doujutsu
3 reviews[AU]Naruto balances nin, gen, and tai jutsu with the kuro[nin], aka[gen], and aoi[tai] doujutsu which he acquires by performing the ritual of the forbidden bloodline.
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Balance of Three: Three Doujutsu
(#) Shobs 2006-06-22
I've read this on FF.net, and I have to say, it was much easier to read there. I liked the story, and am always awaiting updates but...
This, however, isn't something I'd even touch in its current format. Would it be too much to ask to resubmit it with spaces/line breaks? Not to sound demanding or anything, but that "illerate" rating someone gave you is fitting in it's current state..
Good luck.
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(#) nakamaru122 2006-09-28
I like the idea behind this story keep the story going and it could be an amazing story
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