(#) PartyPoisonn3 2011-07-08First off, your story is amazing! very descriptive and just amazing
Anyhow! I have a few ideas aka requests for torture methods.
1. Use the one from the movie are you scared and have him go into a pitch black room and every once in a while, an EXTREMELY bright lights flashes for a bit and then it goes black again..
2. The chinese water torture... where they drip cold water on his forehead for a reaaalllyyy long time
3. And of course the worst torture method of all... anticipation and isolation
Lol I'm probably gonna grow up to be a serial killer.... oh well!
(#) xenakisfox101112 2011-07-19Like mai friend said, (PartyPoisenn3) you definetly have a talent for writing! jealousy i WOULD like something more involving knives, just cuz i loooooove blood and knives in stories. Please dont ask. hmmm... Pressure Points.. i hate it when MY friends come up and squeese that part inbetween your neck and shoulder. look up common pressure points on a grown (and incredibly sexy) man and then have some japanese guy come in and go nuts like Tai Lee from avatar: the last airbender! high pitched sound ! i HATE that. like, he wont know where its coming from and he'll go nuts! welp, those are my suggestions! and by suggestions, i mean commands. do it! :P por vavor??
- these updates make my life! update for me? it's my birthday.... :)
also, i had an idea. Maybe that thing where they play really load metallica then softer classical music. They like switch back and forth but every time the metallica interval gets longer and louder and the classical gets shorter and softer
(#) CaroZ-Shock_WayIero 2011-11-12Very graphic. very disturbing. In other words, I LOVE THIS STORY SOO MUCH!!!!! XD i never thought that id say that about a torture story about Gerard but i am! your story's amazing!!
by the way, i have a few torture suggestions:
1) hang him from the ceiling by giant hooks in his back/feet/torso or wherever, and leave him there until his flesh rips open and he falls to the ground. then they can do it again in another spot and etc., etc.
2) you know the little delicate peice of skin on the inside of your mouth connecting your gums to your lips? have the blackbirds hold him down and take pliers and rip his lips from his gums or something, idk how to describe it well. then they can sew his mouth shut and when they feed him rip his mouth open causing the stitches to rip through his lips or something
3) or just good ol' fashioned teeth pulling
i know, im a little wierd, but please, keep this story going! its AMAZING!!
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