(#) Broken_Feathers 2011-06-18Yeah it's okay I like it and it doesn't matter if nobody reviews because you can be good at it if you believe in yourself over time more people will start reading your stories and then they will start reviewing I don't get that many reviews but either way sometimes I don't get any but I continue to write because I enjoy it. Well now I'm babbling. I review your story so if you will be kind enough PLEASE read any of my stories PLEASE?
(#) RhiannaNekozawa 2011-08-17Heya Erin. Betcha can't guess who it is ;)
Anyway, this is good. You have a very human way of writing, which is both refreshing and exciting to read, and which I, personally, enjoy immensely.
I like the themes around normal teenage crushes and how sometimes you just want them to go away.
One thing you could try to work on is punctuation in speech, which I know I've mentioned before but you do it when you're writing normally so I don't see why the fact that this is on a computer should change anything.
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